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electricity has become an important part in our lives, but what would happen if we didn’t have it? I believe that we would begin to look for new forms to entertain us, make other activities, we would organize our time, ... I believe that the main thing is to be aware from the importance of the electricity, and maybe when we are conscientious, we ‘ll can to learn to take care of it, the "Earth hour" tries to demonstrate that all united ones we can change the situation, and that the cooperation of each one is not an isolated act, because when acting altogether we could be obtained great things.
http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/3032619/#23859822
electricity has become an important part in our lives, but what would happen if we didn’t have it? I believe that we would begin to look for new forms to entertain us, make other activities, we would organize our time, ... I believe that the main thing is to be aware from the importance of the electricity, and maybe when we are conscientious, we ‘ll can to learn to take care of it, the "Earth hour" tries to demonstrate that all united ones we can change the situation, and that the cooperation of each one is not an isolated act, because when acting altogether we could be obtained great things.http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/3032619/#23859822
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I liked the fact that you included interesting and personal thoughts about this issue. Congratulations.
I found some mistakes: to be aware from, should be to be aware of. We will can learn.....we can be able to learn. this verb (can), does not take a will auxiliary.
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